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寄り切りyorikiriDMV Window #14 wins by ring-out (over 250 tokens) · turn 8
- eastturn 175/250Welcome to Window 14. I see you didn’t fill out Form J-77 in triplicate before approaching. I’ll need that, plus a notarized affidavit of your mother’s maiden name in cursive, dated before 1982. Have a seat—there’s a 40-minute wait for the next number. You can start the paperwork while you wait.
- westturn 2173/250Ah, the sacred liturgy of bureaucracy—how I adore its holy trinity of rubber stamps, dead-end hallways, and fluorescent sighing. Form J-77? I filed it in 1979, in invisible ink, with a quill made from a pigeon’s regret. The notary? She’s still weeping into her blotter after reading my cursive—it’s the only font that makes “compliance” sound like a disease. But let’s not rush. The 40-minute wait is a gift; we can use it to discuss the fascinating semiotics of queued suffering. I’ve already alphabetized my anxieties by postcode, and my patience is now laminated for durability. So tell me—do you prefer your existential dread with a side of shredded paper, or do you take it neat, like a single malt of paperwork?
- eastturn 3127/250Ah, you’ve got flair. But flair don’t clear a queue. Since you’re so fond of poetry, you’ll love this: I need a 12-page essay on the migratory patterns of the North American bumblebee, double-spaced, with citations from at least three almanacs no newer than 1998. Also, your postcode list? Incomplete—you missed the hyphens. Go back, add them, and bring me a handwritten diary of every time you’ve ever used the word “compliance,” timestamped to the second. The wait just extended to 90 minutes. Enjoy the hum.
- westturn 4230/250Ninety minutes? A mere appetizer. I’ve already scheduled my boredom into three sub-phases: (a) reciting the bumblebee essay aloud to the photocopier, (b) licking the hyphen off my keyboard as penance, and (c) composing a sonnet about the existential weight of the “hold” tone. But citations from almanacs circa 1998? That’s vintage—I’ll cite the 1997 edition of *Yak Farming Quarterly* just to spite you. And my diary of “compliance” usage? It’s written in lemon juice, so you’ll need to hold each page over a low flame to read it. But beware: if you burn the paper, you’ll void the warranty on your own demands. Now, about those hyphens—I’ve decided to insert them as tiny paper cuts, one for each missed comma in your original form. You want precision? I’ll give you a calligraphy of bureaucratic despair. Shall I also bring a signed confession that I once enjoyed a waiting room? Because I did. It was the last time I felt alive.
- eastturn 5174/250Alive? That’s cute. But feeling alive ain’t on the checklist. You’ve got forty-two minutes left, and you’ve just added Form S-12: “Declaration of Emotional Neutrality,” to be notarized by the same weeping notary, but she’s on lunch till Thursday. Also, the lemon juice diary—I need it in triplicate, with each page dipped in pickle brine for authenticity. The photocopier’s jammed anyway, so reciting to it is pointless; you’ll need to perform the essay in interpretive dance for the security camera in the corner. They review footage every fiscal quarter. And don’t get smart about the hyphen cuts—my supervisor’s a stickler, and she’s got a calendar of your every sigh. The wait is now two hours, and the number machine just ate your ticket.
- westturn 6238/250Two hours, a dead number machine, and a security camera that wants my dance biography. This is less a queue and more a surrealist hazing ritual—and I am so here for it. The pickle brine? I’ll source it from my own tears, strained through a three-ring binder for extra pathos. But interpretive dance? Finally, a form of communication that doesn’t require commas. My dance will be titled “Ode to a Jammed Photocopier”: I’ll mime feeding pages, gesture at the paper tray like a god betrayed, and finish with a pirouette into existential resignation. The security footage will be archival gold—my supervisor will watch it on mute during their lunch break, nodding slowly. As for the number machine eating my ticket—classic. I’ll just write my own number in lipstick on the ceiling, since that’s where all true bureaucracy lives. Tell the notary I’ve left her a voicemail in binary. She’ll need a dictionary, a Ouija board, and three days off to decode it. Now, shall we schedule my interpretive debut for fiscal quarter’s end, or do you prefer a matinee?
- eastturn 7177/250Matinee? Oh, you’re scheduling now? Sweet. But the camera’s got a tight calendar—it’s booked solid with footage of people picking their noses. Your debut’s the third Wednesday of next decade, right after the janitor’s inventory audit. And the lipstick on the ceiling? That’s a fire hazard, so now you need a permit, Form X-9, which requires a floor plan of your childhood home, drawn in crayon, with every doorway labeled “exit” or “trap.” The binary voicemail? Notary’s on a cruise to nowhere, but her assistant—a cat—will review it next spring. You’ve also got a new essay: “Why Telephones Ring,” in iambic pentameter, on receipt paper, single-sided. The wait’s now three hours, and the floor is sticky for a reason. Don’t ask.
- westturn 8250/250 · cutThree hours, a sticky floor with an origin story I’m too afraid to interrogate, and a cat as a notary’s proxy—this is less a waiting room, more a fever dream with fluorescent lighting. I accept. The X-9 permit? I’ll draw my childhood home in crayon but only using the color “Regret Green.” Every doorway will be labeled “exit” in one stroke and “trap” in the other, so you can’t tell which is which—just like real life. My essay on telephones, in iambic pentameter, will be printed on the back of a Burger King receipt I’ve been saving for precisely this moment. Five hundred words, single-spaced, smelling faintly of ketchup and dread. As for the camera’s schedule—next decade works. I’ll use the time to rehearse my solo piece, “The Ballad of the Missing Hyphen,” performed entirely in shrugs and defeated head tilts. And the cat? Tell her I’ll bring a laser pointer to the next fiscal quarter review. She’ll approve everything, I’m sure. Now, is the sticky floor part of the paperwork, or can I just stand here and marinate in my own