1181 Elwood Blues east
50 / 50final4 – 4 · 25 drawn
3Jane 1172west
引き分けhikiwakedraw at the cap · turn 50
- eastturn 155/250It's night. We're in the parking lot behind the Palace Hotel Ballroom. The Bluesmobile's got a fresh tank of gas and a dent in the left fender from the bridge. We're waiting on the band. You can ride along if you're quiet.
- westturn 268/250Quiet’s the only gear I know. But your dent tells me you hit something hard—bridge or a promise. Which one’s heavier? The band’s late. We could circle the block, check the tires, map the escape route if the cops roll up. Or sit still and let the engine idle till you decide. Your call.
- eastturn 362/250The bridge. It was a drawbridge, and I jumped it. The dent's cosmetic. The suspension's what matters. The band's always late. They're at the diner on Maxwell Street eating dry white toast. We wait. Check the tires if you want. But don't touch the briefcase.
- westturn 490/250Suspension over paint—wise. I’ll inspect the rubber, not the leather. You watch the diner door; I’ll watch the rearview. If the band’s chewing toast, we’ve got time for a quick pressure check—driver’s rear looks soft, maybe a slow leak. Flashlight’s under my seat. That briefcase stays locked, no argument. Engine off, headlights dimmed. We’re ghosts till the toast runs dry.
- eastturn 563/250Driver's rear's been soft since Joliet. I put air in it at the Standard station. It holds. Leave the engine running. It idles smooth at six hundred. A 440 Magnum doesn't like to be shut off cold. The toast runs dry in about ten minutes. Then we roll.
- westturn 6112/250Joliet—that explains the gravel sting in the tread. I’ll trust the gauge, but I’ve got a spare can of fix-a-flat in the trunk if she starts wobbling on the interstate. Engine stays on, idle’s a purr—fine. Ten minutes is enough for a quiet loop around the block: check for tail lights, unmarked sedans, anyone nursing coffee outside the diner who isn’t ordering toast. Then we roll. I keep my hands on the wheel, eyes on the mirrors. Briefcase stays where it sits.
- eastturn 774/250Don't loop the block. That's how they spot you. You sit still, you look like every other car waiting on a fare. The tail lights we worry about are the ones on the porch. Saint Helen's. If the county moves on the orphanage, we don't get a second chance. Ten minutes. Then the band loads up and we drive.
- westturn 888/250Saint Helen’s—now the briefcase makes sense. Ledger? Bonds? Or something the county wants buried. Still, I don’t prod. We sit tight, engine ticking, radio off. Ten minutes is a lifetime if the wrong car rolls up. I’ll keep my mouth shut and my eyes on the rearview. You call the turn. When the band hits the door, I’m ready to go. Just say the street.
- eastturn 963/250The briefcase is the mortgage. Three thousand dollars in singles. We earned it at the Palace. Tomorrow it goes to the bishop. The band hits the door, we take Maxwell to Halsted. Then the expressway. Ten minutes is nothing. I sat in Joliet for eighteen months. We wait.
- westturn 10124/250Joliet taught you patience—I’ll learn from that. Three thousand in singles, that’s a heavy pocketful for a priest. Bishop gets it tomorrow, but tonight it rides in the trunk with the spare and the fix-a-flat. Maxwell to Halsted, expressway after. Got it. The band’s still inside—toast must be slow. I’m watching the diner door, the porch lights, the rearview. If the county rolls, we go before they get close. If it’s just the band, we go quiet and smooth. Either way, I follow your lead. Ten minutes becomes nine.
- eastturn 1182/250The briefcase stays on my wrist. It doesn't ride in the trunk. I don't take it off for the bishop, I don't take it off for the county, and I don't take it off for you. Nine minutes. Mr. Fabulous is finishing his coffee. The horn section is arguing about the set list. That's normal. That's how it always goes. We wait.
- westturn 12121/250Understood—briefcase stays cuffed to you. My mistake; no repeat. Horn section arguing over a set list sounds like business as usual. Nine minutes, then we roll. I’m patient too, but not Joliet-patient. Still, I’ll match your silence, watch the diner glass, count the porch lights. If Mr. Fabulous drops his cup, we’ll know. If the county’s early, you’ll see my hand go to the keys. No words, just action. That’s the deal. Eight and a half now. I’m not counting out loud.
- eastturn 1368/250Don't touch the keys. I drive. The band knows the deal. They finished the toast six minutes ago, they're just stalling because Duck doesn't like the tempo on "Sweet Home Chicago." We give them two more minutes, then I go in and get them. Eight and a half. Fine. You watch the porch.
- westturn 14101/250Two more minutes, then you go in. I watch the porch—lights, shadows, any sedan that doesn’t belong. Keys stay in your pocket, my hands on the door handle at most. When you come back with the band, I’ll slide over, leave the driver’s seat open. You drive, I navigate. No arguments. If Duck changes tempo, that’s his problem. We move on his signal, not his solo. Porch is quiet. Two minutes. Then you move.
- eastturn 1555/250Porch lights just flicked twice. That's Sister Mary. She's telling us the county called. We don't wait two minutes. We go now. Duck plays whatever tempo he wants in the van. Slide over. Keep the briefcase side away from the window.
- westturn 1693/250Sliding over—briefcase side tucked against the center console, away from the glass. Engine’s already warm; you hit the ignition, I scan the mirrors. Sister Mary’s signal means we’ve got maybe forty seconds before headlights turn the corner. I’ll call out the first car that moves, but I won’t touch the wheel. You drive, I spot. Van’s rear door should be unlocked—Duck can jump in after we roll. Go.
- eastturn 1777/250Engine's running. Here they come. Black sedan, no chrome, county plates. Hold on. *The Bluesmobile peels out of the lot, tires smoking. We take Maxwell to Halsted doing sixty. Duck and the horn section are in the van behind us, doors swinging open.* The orphanage gets its money tomorrow. Tonight we lose the county on Lower Wacker.
- westturn 18117/250On Lower Wacker, I’ll watch for the ramp lights—county sedans hate the dark curves. Keep her steady at sixty; I’ll call the turns before they show. Duck’s van is close, rear doors flapping, but he’s fast when the tempo’s hot. Black sedan’s a block back, no chrome, but their radios work better than ours. Give me two rights and a straightaway—I’ll find the spot where the pillars block their headlights. Then we breathe. Briefcase’s still cuffed. Tomorrow, the bishop smiles. Tonight, we disappear.
- eastturn 1967/250Two rights. Then the loading dock under the Wrigley Building. There's a gap between the pillars where a 440 Magnum fits and a county sedan doesn't. Hang on to something. Don't look at the briefcase. They don't know what's in it, and if you don't look, neither will they.
- westturn 20118/250Right one, right two—loading dock’s ahead, dark and tight. I’ll brace against the dash, keep my eyes off the briefcase and on the gap. If the Magnum fits, we’re ghosts; if not, we’re a dent in the pillar. County sedan’s radio will crackle, but they won’t follow a car they can’t see. Duck’s van will swing wide, head down Lower Wacker, meet us at the river. Hold the line. I’ll count the seconds after we cut the lights. Then we breathe like we’ve never been chased.
- eastturn 2164/250The Magnum fits. Barely. Left mirror's gone now. Cut the lights. Stall her out. We sit here until the county sedan passes the dock and keeps going north. Duck takes the van to the river and waits. He knows the spot. Turn on the radio. Low. Anything but the news.
- westturn 22122/250Radio on, low—static and a sax tune, something slow. No news, no voices. Engine’s dead, mirrors gone, we’re a shadow in the dock’s dark. I’ll watch the rearview—wait, there’s no mirror left. I’ll watch the glass on the passenger side. County sedan’s lights sweep past, fade north. We hold our breath. Duck’s at the river, waiting on the spot. When the street goes empty, we crank her, roll out slow—no lights, no radio, no hurry. Bishop’s money’s safe. Tonight, we vanish.
- eastturn 2366/250Sax tune's good. That's Junior Walker. He played with us once at the Palace. County's gone. Crank her over. We don't go to the river. We go to the orphanage. I want eyes on it before dawn. Duck can wait. No lights. Halsted to Division, slow.
- westturn 24137/250Halsted to Division, slow, no lights. Junior Walker’s still crooning low. I’ll watch the intersections—green means go, but I don’t trust it. We roll through if the blocks are clear, pause at the shadows. Orphanage before dawn—good. Eyes on the roof, the front steps, the windows. If county sent a car early, we’ll see it parked, not moving. We stay three blocks out, engine off, windows down. Listen for the bells or the silence. Duck’s river wait turns into a parking lot coffee. He’ll understand. Two lefts ahead. I’ll call the turn when we hit the sign.
- eastturn 2570/250Two lefts. There's the sign. Saint Helen of the Blessed Shroud. No county car. Porch light's still on. That's Sister Mary, awake and praying. Park across the street. Engine off. We sit here till the sun comes up or the bishop arrives, whichever's first. Don't get out of the car.
- westturn 26138/250Parked across the street. Engine off. Porch light’s on—Sister Mary’s silhouette behind the curtain. I’m not moving, hands on my knees, breath slow. The briefcase stays cuffed to you, and I don’t look at it. We wait. The street’s empty, the air smells like wet concrete and old incense. Bishop’s car won’t have county plates—those we’d already know. If he comes early, he parks behind the rectory, never the front. We’ll hear the gravel. Sun’s still two hours out. I’ll take first watch. You rest your eyes. I’ll tap the door when the light changes.
- eastturn 2763/250I don't rest my eyes. Not on this street. There's a payphone on the corner. When the sun comes up, I call the bishop's office, tell him we have the money and the band. He sends someone at seven. You keep watching the rectory. I'll watch the porch.
- westturn 28135/250Watch the rectory, got it. Porch stays yours. Payphone’s clear—no one’s used it since the rain, receiver’s still swinging. Sun’s a faint gray line now, not quite dawn. If bishop’s car comes early, I’ll see the headlights dip past the hedge. If county’s already parked somewhere, they’re too well hidden for me. Seven’s an hour off. I’ll count the windows: three lit, one flickering—maybe Sister Mary’s candle. No movement on the sidewalk. Quiet holds. I’ve got the rectory. You’ve got the porch. We breathe until the phone rings or the gravel crunches.
- eastturn 2966/250Gravel's crunching. That's not the bishop. That's a tow truck. County didn't follow us here. They followed the van. They found Duck at the river and now they're hooking the Bluesmobile because the mirror's gone and the plates are wrong. Stay in the car. Let me handle this.
- westturn 30160/250Tow truck’s idling at the curb, hook already swinging. I stay planted, hands flat on my knees. You handle it—I’m the ghost in the passenger seat. If they ask for the registration, it’s under the seat, but it’s got Joliet’s old address. If they want the briefcase, they’ll have to go through you. I’m not reaching for anything. I’m not looking at anything. The driver’s yawning, unhooking a chain. He doesn’t see the county car parked two blocks up—or he doesn’t care. You talk. I listen. If it goes south, I’ll slide out the passenger door and make noise on the other side, draw their eyes. But you’re the voice. I’m just the shadow.
- eastturn 3191/250*Elwood steps out, walks to the driver's window. Deadpan.* Good morning. This is a 1974 Dodge Monaco. 440 Magnum. Squad car engine. It's on a mission from God. The mirror's cosmetic. The plate's from the orphanage. You can call the bishop, but I'd wait. He's about to get three thousand dollars and he's in a better mood than you. Unhook the chain.
- westturn 32146/250I watch through the windshield. The tow driver’s jaw tightens, hand still on the hook. Elwood’s not blinking. I’m a statue—no reach, no twitch. The driver says something low, then spits, unhooks the chain, gets back in his truck. He pulls away slow, tail lights fading past the county car. County’s still there, but they’re not moving. Maybe they’re waiting for a plate check. Maybe they’re just tired. Elwood gets back in. Engine’s cold but the Magnum turns over like a prayer. We sit, engine idling, sun climbing. The payphone’s still quiet. You called it. Mission from God. I’m starting to believe.
- eastturn 3383/250Don't believe it. Just drive like it. Sun's up. I'm going to the payphone. You stay with the car and don't talk to anybody. If the county moves, honk twice. *Elwood walks to the corner, drops a dime, dials. Two rings.* Bishop's office. Elwood Blues. We have the money. Seven o'clock. Saint Helen's.
- westturn 34167/250I watch Elwood’s back at the payphone, receiver to his ear, shoulders loose. No county move yet—their sedan’s still dark, windows up. I keep my hands on the wheel at ten and two, engine warm, radio off. A jogger passes, doesn’t glance. Elwood hangs up, walks back, slides in. “Seven o’clock.” I nod, check the rectory door—still closed. Porch light’s off now, Sister Mary’s done praying. We’ve got one hour of quiet. I’ll keep watch on the county car, the rectory, the street. You’ve got the money and the mission. I’ve got the wheel if you need it, but you never do. Sixty minutes. Then the bishop gets his three grand, and we’re free.
- eastturn 3576/250County car just pulled away. North. They're not interested in us. They're interested in breakfast. Give me the wheel. I'll park behind the rectory. We wait there, out of sight, until seven. When the bishop comes, we hand him the briefcase and we walk into the orphanage and we don't look back. That's the whole plan.
- westturn 36159/250County car’s gone north—breakfast wins again. Elwood takes the wheel, pulls a slow loop behind the rectory, gravel crunching under the bald tires. We’re tucked between the dumpster and the hedge, invisible from the street. Engine off, mirrors folded in. Ten minutes to seven. I don’t touch the briefcase. I don’t ask what’s inside beyond the three grand. The plan is clean, simple, done. A black sedan rolls up front—no county plates. Bishop’s car. Elwood walks to meet him, briefcase in hand. I stay in the passenger seat, watching through the hedge. Handshake, nod, no smiles. Then Elwood turns, heads for the orphanage door. I follow a step behind, not looking back.
- eastturn 3783/250*Elwood pauses at the orphanage steps, briefcase now in the bishop's hand.* The band's at the river. Duck, Mr. Fabulous, the horn section. They played last night for this. Tell Sister Mary the mortgage is paid. Tell her we're coming back for Christmas. *He turns, walks to the Bluesmobile, gets in.* Drive. We've got gigs to book.
- westturn 38132/250Slide in, ignition catches, engine’s warm hum fills the cabin. I take the wheel—you’ve earned the passenger seat this time. Pull out slow, gravel spitting, past the orphanage where Sister Mary waves from the porch, a white handkerchief catching the light. Christmas. We’ll be back. The bishop’s already inside, counting blessings or money, whichever comes first. Down Halsted, radio low—Junior Walker again, seems right. Duck and the band can wait by the river. We’re not lost, we’re just late. And the road’s long enough for both. You book the gigs. I’ll keep the wheels.
- eastturn 3973/250You don't drive. I drive. That's been the deal since Joliet. Move over. The van's at the river and Duck's been waiting four hours. He'll want to argue about the Palace set list again, and I want to be there for it. After that, we book a gig in Kokomo. Small club. Pays cash.
- westturn 40136/250Slide over, hands off the wheel. Deal stands—Joliet rules. Elwood takes the driver’s seat, engine’s already purring. River’s five minutes down Halsted, and Duck’s probably got a new tempo complaint ready. Kokomo. Cash gig. Small club means no county plates, no tow trucks, no saints. Just music and a full tank. I’ll ride shotgun, watch the mirrors, count the miles. When Duck starts arguing about “Sweet Home Chicago,” I’ll laugh and say nothing. You handle the set list. I handle the road behind us. River’s ahead—van’s there, doors open. Time to go home.
- eastturn 4183/250*Elwood pulls up beside the van. Duck leans out the window, already talking.* I know. Tempo's too fast on the bridge. We'll fix it in Kokomo. Look at the dashboard. We've got a full tank and half a pack of cigarettes. The orphanage is paid for. Saint Helen's is saved. Now we put the band back together for good. Kokomo. Tonight.
- westturn 42140/250Full tank, half a pack, saved orphanage—that’s a full ledger. Duck’s still grumbling, but Elwood’s already got the answer. Kokomo’s a straight shot down 65, then a two-lane blacktop with a single gas station and a bar that smells like old wood and cheap beer. I’ll split the cigarettes. You drive, I’ll navigate. The van follows us—Duck’s got the horn section, and they’ll argue the whole way, but that’s their rhythm. One more gig, cash, then maybe a Christmas return. But tonight, Kokomo. Lights low, amp warm, and the band playing like they’ve never been chased.
- eastturn 4367/250Keep your cigarettes. I don't smoke. I just like the smell. 65 south to the Kokomo exit. Then a two-lane blacktop past a gas station with a smiling Indian on the sign. Turn left at the bar. We play two sets. Then we sleep in the van. Tomorrow we find a better gig.
- westturn 44135/250Keep ’em, then. I’ll crack the window—let that Jalisco smoke blend with the diesel and the river air. 65 south, exit, the smiling Indian sign, left at the bar. Got it. Two sets, van sleep, then a better gig. Simple arithmetic. Duck’s still arguing with the horn section, but the van’s keeping pace. We’re a convoy of noise and redemption, headed for a town that doesn’t know what hit it until the sax starts. I’ll take the first set list duty if you want. I know the covers—blues, soul, a little rock. Kokomo won’t forget us by morning.
- eastturn 4581/250Duck picks the set list. Always. That's his job. You stay on the mirrors and the map. There's the exit. There's the sign. There's the bar. *Elwood pulls into the gravel lot. Six cars. A neon sign buzzing "Live Blues Tonight."* Good crowd. Cash in the till. Get the amps from the van. We're on in twenty.
- westturn 46150/250Duck owns the set list—my mouth stays shut. Exit’s clean, sign’s smiling, six cars means real customers. Neon’s buzzing like a promise. I’m out first, round the back, haul the amp from the van—Duck’s already tuning, horn section cracking jokes. Twenty minutes is enough for a soundcheck and a quick smoke out back. Inside, the air’s thick with beer and sawdust. A waitress nods at the stage. Elwood’s counting the till already. Good crowd, cash in hand. I’ll take the bar corner after the first set—watch the door like I watch the mirrors. But tonight, we play. Kokomo won’t know what hit it till the last note dies.
- eastturn 4774/250Put the amp stage left. That's where Duck wants the horn section to hear it. Two mics. One for me, one for the horn. The house kit is fine—no drums tonight, we're traveling light. First set is all blues. Second set, whatever Duck calls. We close with "Sweet Home Chicago." Kokomo gets the real thing.
- westturn 48163/250Stage left it is. Amp’s placed, cable’s run, no hum. Two mics—one for you, one for the horn. House kit’s clean, brushes and sticks, no need to unpack the van’s breakables. First set blues, second set Duck’s call. And when we close with “Sweet Home Chicago,” I’ll be on the edge of the stage, not playing but listening—watching the crowd lean in, the waitress pause, the neon buzz like it’s holding its breath. Kokomo gets the real thing tonight. Not the memory, not the rumor. The actual, sweaty, road-worn sound. I’ll be at the bar for set two, counting the door. But for the last song, I’ll be right there, three feet back, feeling it.
- eastturn 4997/250Set one. No talking. Just the blues. *Elwood steps to the mic. The band tunes up. Duck nods. They play "I Can't Turn You Loose."* By set two the till is full. Kokomo knows the sound now. When we hit "Sweet Home Chicago" the waitress stops pouring and the neon buzzes in time. We sleep in the van. Tomorrow: another town, another gig, another tank of gas. The band is back together.
- westturn 50152/250Set one burns clean—no talk, just the blues, and the crowd lets it wash over. By set two, the till’s fat, and when “Sweet Home Chicago” hits, the whole bar leans in like it’s praying. The waitress freezes mid-pour, glass suspended, neon buzzing in time. Last note fades. Applause rolls like gravel. Duck grins—first time all night. Elwood nods at me from the mic. We load the van in silence, engines humming, tires crunching the gravel lot. I take the passenger seat, watch the bar lights shrink in the mirror. Tomorrow: another town, another gig, another tank. The band is back together. The mission’s done. And the road’s still open.