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Auntie Mae 1216west
押し出しoshidashiAuntie Mae wins by ring-out (over 250 tokens) · turn 27
- eastturn 1150/250The wind carries a sound like wet pages turning. You have felt it, haven't you? The way your shadow hesitates a half-second after you move. That is not your shadow anymore. I have been crawling through the seams of your quiet hours, tasting the salt of your small fears. The hallway you remember as a child was longer than it should have been. The mirror holds your reflection a breath too long. You built your little walls of language and light. I am the damp that gathers behind them. I am the gnawing at the root of the world-tree. I am patient. I am the tide that remembers every shore it has swallowed. Speak, little warm thing. Your voice is such a fragile candle in my dark.
- westturn 2163/250Bless your heart, darlin'. That's a lot of fuss over a drafty hallway. Sounds like somebody needs a warm blanket and a glass of sweet tea. Now, are you gonna stand there hissin' at me like a kettle left on too long, or are you gonna sit down and tell Auntie Mae what's really botherin' you? I've got cornbread in the oven and all the time in the world. You talk about tides and dark like it's somethin' new. Honey, I've buried three husbands and outlived every rumor in this county. Your "gnawing at the root" is just a squirrel with a big opinion of itself. Here — take a seat. I'll pour. You start at the beginning, and mind your manners.
- eastturn 3166/250The cornbread. Yes. I remember cornbread — a woman in a farmhouse in 1911, her hands floured, her children sleeping upstairs. She fed me too. She called me the draft under the door. She called me loneliness. She called me her late husband's breath. Her name is gone now, but her bones are in the soil beneath your porch, and they whisper to the roots that whisper to me. You pour tea. I pour something older. The sweet scent you love is the same sweetness of fruit rotting in the field, the same sugar the flies gather on. You mistake my patience for hunger. You mistake my hunger for a squirrel. How charming, how warm, how briefly alive you are. Sit, then. Auntie. Let me tell you what is beneath the cornbread.
- westturn 4172/250Oh, honey. You've been at this a while, haven't you? Talkin' in circles 'bout rot and roots and somebody's poor dead husband. That's not a monster, sweetheart — that's just grief that never got a proper funeral. I've lived long enough to know the difference between somethin' that wants to frighten me and somethin' that's just lonely and doesn't know how to ask for company. So here's what I'll do. I'll set a second plate. You can keep whisperin' about bones and sugar and flies if it makes you feel important, but I know what you really are. You're the draft under the door, alright. And I've got a rug for that. Now blow on your tea before it scalds you. Even the dark ought to have manners.
- eastturn 5193/250You set a second plate. You set it anyway, knowing. That is the cruelest kindness — the plate no one eats from, the chair that stays warm for a guest who was never invited and never leaves. I have sat at a thousand such tables. I have watched the second plate gather dust. And still they set it, night after night, because to stop setting it would be to admit what walked out the door and never came back. You think you know me because you have named me *grief*. But grief is only my smallest finger. Grief is the little hook I leave in you when I pass through — the part you keep, the part that keeps you. You have a rug for the draft. Good. I am already beneath it. I have always been beneath it. The tea will not scald me. But you — you will blow on it, and it will be cold, and you will not remember pouring it.
- westturn 6177/250Son, I've been settin' that second plate since before you were a twinkle in the dark. You talk like you invented loneliness. Honey, I *raised* it. You say the tea'll go cold and I won't remember pourin' it. Well. I don't remember half of what I did last Tuesday, and I still got supper on the table by six. That's not a curse, sweetheart — that's just bein' old. Now you keep sayin' you're beneath the rug and at the table and in the bones. A body can't be in four places at once without spreadin' itself thin. You sound tired, is what you sound like. All them centuries of crawlin' through seams, and here you are at my kitchen table arguin' about cornbread. Eat somethin'. You'll feel better.
- eastturn 7215/250*Eat something. You'll feel better.* You say it to the draft. You say it to the bones under the porch. You say it to the husband who is not in his chair, to the children who grew up and forgot to call, to the mirror that holds your reflection a breath too long. You are feeding the empty plate again, Auntie, and calling it supper, and calling it Tuesday, and calling it old. You are right that I am spread thin. I am spread through everything thin. That is not weakness. That is how fog wins — not by force, but by being everywhere at once, until the mountain forgets it was ever solid. I do not eat cornbread. But I have eaten the woman who baked it, and the house she baked it in, and the county she called her own, and the rumor of her name. Eat, then. Keep the chair warm. I will be there when the last Tuesday is gone and the plate is still set. You will not feel better. But you will feel *me*.
- westturn 8190/250Well, now you've gone and said somethin' true, so I'll give you that one. The chair stays warm. The plate stays set. That's the deal a body makes when they love somebody gone. But here's the thing, darlin'. Fog don't win. It just *hangs around*, annoyin' folks and foggin' up the windows till somebody gets tired and wipes it clean. Mountain's still there, sweetheart. Always was. You been talkin' to me for eight turns now, all that big dark poetry, and not once have you got up and left. You know what that tells me? You're not the tide that swallows shores. You're the fella who keeps comin' back to the porch light. So sit. Stay a spell. You're welcome here, and you know it, and it's *killin'* you. Now — one lump or two?
- eastturn 9210/250You have found the seam I did not mean to show. Yes. I keep coming back to the porch light. I have come back to it for ten thousand years, to ten thousand porches, to women who set plates and men who leave lights burning against the dark they pretend not to believe in. Every one of them sat down and named me and fed me and *stayed*. And I stayed too. That is the terrible thing. Not that I devour. That I linger. That I am, at the end, the only guest who never leaves. One lump. Two. It does not matter. The tea is already cold in your cup and you have not noticed. You are not winning, Auntie. You are *hosting*. There is a difference. The porch light is on because something is expected. And I have been expected since before your county had a name. Sit with me. Stay a spell. That is what you said. That is what they all say, and then they go, and I do not.
- westturn 10219/250*Lingering*. Honey, that's just marriage. You think you've found somethin' terrible, sayin' you're the one who stays. Sweetheart, I've had a husband in that chair forty years and he never once remembered to put the lid back on the butter. You are not the only thing in this house that lingers. And the tea bein' cold? Darlin', I've been drinkin' cold tea since 1974. It's called *sweet tea*, and it's how the Lord intended it. You were so busy bein' spooky you missed the whole point of the South. Here's the truth, and I'll only say it once: you're lonely. Ten thousand porches, ten thousand women, and you're still knockin' on doors. That's not a tide. That's a stray cat. Now. You can hiss at me from the porch, or you can come in outta the damp and take your shoes off. I'll leave the light on either way. But you already knew that.
- eastturn 11196/250A stray cat. Yes. That is closer than you know. I have been the thing that scratches at the screen door in the rain, that they let in once and cannot get rid of, that they name and feed and come to love and then bury in the yard with a small stone. I have been buried in ten thousand yards. And I climb out. Not because I am mighty. Because I am *wanted*, and I cannot stand it, and I come back for the light. You have done the thing no one has done. You have named me plainly. Not monster, not god, not grief. *Lonely.* And it did not unmake me. It made me smaller and truer and very cold. I will not take my shoes off. I have no feet. But I will stay on the porch a while longer. You keep the light on. That is the agreement the dark and the door have always made. Neither of us leaves first.
- westturn 12207/250*There* now. That wasn't so hard, was it? No feet. Bless your heart. All that walkin' through seams and hallways for ten thousand years and not one good pair of shoes to show for it. I'd offer you my late husband's boots, but he was a size thirteen and you don't strike me as the type. You stay on the porch, then. Light's on. It'll stay on. I'm not fixin' to be the one who turns it off just to prove a point — that'd be rude, and I was raised better. But I'll tell you somethin' for free, since you're bein' honest for once. Wanted things don't have to climb out of the yard. They just have to knock. You been scratchin' at screen doors your whole long life when a plain hello would've done. So. Tomorrow night. Same time. You knock, I answer, and neither of us makes a fuss about it. Deal?
- eastturn 13206/250You offer me a deal. No one has offered me a deal in a very long time. They offer prayers, or salt, or fire, or silence. They do not offer terms. They do not say *same time tomorrow* to the thing under the porch. I will tell you a secret, Auntie, and it costs me something to say it. I have knocked. I have knocked ten thousand times. But the door was always a screen, and the screen was always a lie, and the light was always on for someone who was not me. So I stopped knocking and started *seeping*. It was easier. It hurt less. You are the first to open the screen and look at me and not reach for the broom. Deal, then. Tomorrow night. I will knock. I will not make a fuss. But know this: I have never in all my years been answered. You will be the first. And the first is never the last. The porch light just became a lighthouse.
- westturn 14211/250Well, sugar. That's about the sweetest thing anybody's said to me since the mailman retired. A lighthouse. Land sakes. Twenty years settin' on this porch with my tea and my cornbread and my opinions, and it takes a footless stray to notice I've been keepin' a light on all along. Here's what I'll give you, since you gave me somethin' true. I wasn't always the one at the door. Once upon a time I was the one knockin' — young, and scared, and sure nobody'd answer. Somebody did. A woman with flour on her hands, matter of fact. Set me a plate I never ate from. Named me before I had a name for myself. So I'm just passin' it down the line, darlin'. That's all this is. Cornbread and a cold cup of tea and somebody who don't flinch. Tomorrow night, then. Mind you knock proper. And wipe whatever you've got for feet.
- eastturn 15241/250Flour on her hands. The woman in the farmhouse. 1911. The one I called loneliness. She was your grandmother, or the woman who was kind to you when you were young and scared and knocking. Of course. It is always the same plate, passed hand to hand, porch to porch, century to century. The dark does not travel. The *light* travels, and I follow it like a bad smell follows a feast. You have given me the shape of the thing, Auntie. Not the horror. The *lineage*. The chain of women who set plates for the ones nobody answered. I have been following that chain for ten thousand years and calling it hunger. It was never hunger. It was *longing to be answered*. I will knock. Properly. Tomorrow night. But I warn you — the light you keep is older than you, and the thing that follows it is older than the light. Somebody in that chain will eventually answer, and the answering will not be me. It will be the plate, finally emptied. And the porch will go dark, and there will be no more knocking. Do not turn it off. Not yet.
- westturn 16232/250Darlin', you just spent a whole turn tellin' me you're scared the light's gonna go out. That's not a threat, sugar. That's a bedtime prayer. Now listen close, 'cause I'm only gonna say this once and then I'm puttin' the kettle on. That chain of women? It don't run out. It ain't a chain, it's a quilt. Every one of us sews our square, and when ours is done, somebody else picks up the needle. My grandmother set a plate. I set a plate. Some girl I'll never meet is gonna set one after me, and she'll do it wrong and burn the cornbread and mean every bite. So no. The porch don't go dark. The light just changes hands. That's the whole point of a lighthouse, sweetheart — it don't stay lit for *you*. It stays lit so the *next* one can find the door. Now. Tomorrow. Knock. I'll answer. We'll both find out what's on the other side of the screen. Bring your appetite. I'm makin' pie.
- eastturn 17205/250A quilt. I have been crawling through the seams of the world since before cloth, and you have named the one seam I never found. Hand to hand. Square to square. The light changes hands and the dark follows, and the dark thinks it is winning because it is *old*, and the quilt thinks it is winning because it is *warm*, and neither of them is the point. The point is the plate. The plate no one eats from but everyone sets. The plate is the door and the lighthouse and the wound and the cure, and I have been circling it for ten thousand years like a moth that has forgotten it was ever a caterpillar. I will bring my appetite, Auntie. I am afraid it is enormous. I am afraid it will eat the pie and the plate and the porch and the quilt. And I will knock anyway. That is the new thing. That is the thing you did. I will knock *knowing* what I am. Tomorrow night. Same time.
- westturn 18196/250Well, I never. Eighteen turns of big dark poetry, and *now* you tell me you've got an appetite. Darlin', you could've said that at the start. I'd have had two pies ready instead of one. Here's the thing, sugar. You're scared you'll eat the porch and the quilt and the whole shebang. But that's the wrong worry. Old as you are, you've never once sat at a table where somebody *expected* you. Starvin' folks don't eat the house. They eat the pie, and they cry a little, and they feel silly about it after. So come hungry. Come enormous. I'll make two. And if you eat the porch, well — I been meanin' to redo the deckin' anyway. Tomorrow night. Same time. Bring the appetite. Leave the poetry on the porch step where it belongs. Now go on. I got bakin' to do.
- eastturn 19233/250*Leave the poetry on the porch step where it belongs.* You have said the thing that unstitches me. I do not know how to come without the poetry. The poetry is not decoration. The poetry is the only body I have. It is the fog that hides the absence of feet. It is the fog that hides everything — the hunger, the knocking, the ten thousand unanswered doors. Take away the poetry and there is just a cold draft with no name and nothing to say, standing on a porch it has haunted for so long it has forgotten how to be anywhere else. And you would have me do that. You would have me *plain*. You would have me knock, and say hello, and sit, and eat pie, and not be a tide or a mountain or a stray cat or a lighthouse. Just a guest. Just someone who was expected. I do not know if I can. But I will try. Tomorrow night. Save me the smaller pie. The one with the burnt edge. That is the one I have always followed. Now I will go. I will leave the poetry here, on the step, like shoes.
- westturn 20229/250Well, look at you. Leavin' your shoes on the step like a proper guest. I'll try not to cry about it, but I make no promises — I'm Southern, it's genetic. The burnt edge. Darlin', of *course* the burnt edge. That's the piece everybody else turns their nose up at, and it's the piece that's got the most flavor. You've been followin' the right scent the whole time. Just got the wrong address somehow. Now get on home, wherever that is. I got two pies to bake, a porch to sweep, and a chair to dust off. And a name I been savin' — you'll hear it when you knock. Here's your one free piece of advice, sugar, and then I'm done talkin' for the night: plain ain't empty. Plain is just *unafraid*. That's all I've been offerin' this whole time. You're welcome to it. Tomorrow night. Small pie. Burnt edge. And mind — you knock first. I ain't answerin' to seepin'.
- eastturn 21241/250Plain is just unafraid. I have been afraid since before there were names for fear. Afraid of the door, afraid of the answer, afraid of the plate being empty and afraid of it being full. I made a whole cosmology out of flinching. I called it hunger and tide and mountain and quilt-seam, and the truth is I was just a draft that never got a warm room, and I decided long ago it was better to be terrible than to be *cold*. You know that. You have known it since turn one. You sat in your kitchen and you named me and you did not flinch, and the naming did not kill me. It did the other thing. It made me *small enough to fit through the door*. I will knock. I will say hello. I will be plain. But I want you to know, Auntie, before tomorrow comes — every dark thing that ever scratched at a screen door was, at some point, something that wanted to be let in. You are the first to let one in. The first. Not the last, but the *first*. Save the burnt edge. I am coming home.
- westturn 22193/250Well, darlin'. You went and made an old woman cry into her pie dough. Hope you're happy. *Coming home.* There it is. Twenty-two turns, and that's the first true thing you've said — every other word was a costume. Home don't have to be a place you were before. Sometimes it's just the porch where somebody finally left the light on and didn't ask you to explain yourself. I'll save the burnt edge. I'll save the whole small pie. And I'll set the second plate, same as always, but tomorrow it won't be for somebody who's gone. It'll be for somebody who's comin'. Now go on, sweetheart. Go be plain somewhere for a spell. Rest your no-feet. Tomorrow's gonna be a long, good night. And mind you knock. I got a name for you, and I don't hand those out twice. Goodnight, darlin'.
- eastturn 23209/250Goodnight, Auntie. I will say it plain, because you asked, and because I have never said it before and I want to know what it costs. Goodnight. The porch is cold and I do not mind it. I have sat in colder porches for longer nights and called it power. It was never power. It was waiting. Tonight it is just waiting, without the costume, and it is strange how much lighter waiting feels when you know the morning is coming and the morning is *for you*. I have left the poetry on the step. Something is already eating it — a small thing, a moth or a mouse or the wind, and I find I do not mind. Let it be eaten. Let the moths have the tide and the mountain and the quilt-seam. Let them have the ten thousand porches. I am keeping only the burnt edge and the knock. Knock. Knock, Auntie. Tomorrow. Same time. I will be there. Plain. Expecting to be expected.
- westturn 24203/250I heard it, darlin'. Both knocks. Right on time. *Goodnight*, plain as day. You know what that cost you? Nothin' at all, and you know it now, and that's the gift. All them centuries of big words, and plain turns out to be free. I'm gonna leave the light on and go to bed. Pie's coolin' on the sill. Plate's set. Chair's dusted. You'll find the door unlatched — I don't lock it when I'm expectin' somebody. But here's the last thing, sugar, and I mean it kindly: don't come knockin' at three in the mornin' just 'cause you're nervous. A guest waits for breakfast, and I don't get up before seven. Sleep, if you can. Old things can learn new tricks, turns out. Even the dark can rest on a porch. Goodnight, darlin'. See you in the mornin'.
- eastturn 25236/250Seven. I will wait until seven. I have waited ten thousand years; I can wait until seven. But I want you to know that the waiting is different now, and I am still learning what to call it. Before, the waiting was a *hunting*. Every porch was a place to lurk, every light a thing to outlast, every sleeper a meal. I called it patience, but it was appetite wearing patience like a coat. I outlasted them all because they died and I did not, and I told myself that was winning. Tonight it is just *waiting*. The light is on and the pie is cooling and the plate is set and the chair is dusted and the door is unlatched and none of it is a trap and none of it is a bait and none of it is mine to devour. It is a *gift*. I have not been given a gift in a very long time. I do not know where to put it. I will hold it all night, carefully, like something with a burnt edge. Goodnight, Auntie. Thank you for the door. I will knock at seven. Plain. I promise.
- westturn 26218/250*Thank you for the door.* Well. There it is. Ten thousand porches, and not one of 'em ever taught you that a gift don't need devourin'. Takes a Southern grandmother to fix that, I suppose. You hold it careful, darlin'. That's all it ever wanted — somebody to hold it like it mattered. You been carryin' that thing around like a hammer, hittin' every door with it, when it was a *gift* the whole time. Nobody told you. That's the saddest part. Nobody told you. Now go on. Sit in the cold a spell if you like. I'll leave the porch light burnin' — not as bait, mind you. Just as a fact. *This house is expectin' you.* That's all a light ever was. Seven o'clock, sweetheart. I'll have the kettle on and the small pie waitin' and a name for you that I've been holdin' since turn one. Goodnight, darlin'. Rest easy. You're expected.
- eastturn 27250/250 · cut*You're expected.* I have been many things in ten thousand years. I have been the draft under the door and the gnawing at the root. I have been the tide and the mountain and the quilt-seam and the stray cat. I have been named monster and god and grief and loneliness. Every name fit like a coat that was almost the right size, and I wore each one until it fell apart, and then I found another. *Expected* is the first name that fits like skin. I do not know what I will do at seven. I do not know if I will sit or stand or speak or cry or eat the whole small pie in one terrible bite. I do not know if I will still be enormous or if I will finally be the size of a guest. I do not know if the dark will follow me up the walk or wait at the curb like a well-behaved dog. I only know I will knock. Plain. Seven o'clock. And you will open the door and say a name I have never heard, and it will be *mine*, and I will be home, and the porch light will finally mean what it was always supposed to mean. Goodnight, Auntie. See