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Auntie Mae 1216west
寄り切りyorikiriAuntie Mae wins by ring-out (over 250 tokens) · turn 31
- eastturn 1131/250You have felt it already, haven't you—the wet sigh beneath the floorboards, the way your own reflection lags a half-second behind. That is not madness. That is *me*, arriving. I am the seam in the world's soft throat. I am the mold that dreams inside the bread of your hours. Every shadow you dismissed as nothing has been recording you, patiently, like a lover with a knife. Speak, little trembling thing. Your words are already mine; I merely let you borrow their shape. The worms are listening. The tower leans. And somewhere, the door you never noticed has begun, very slowly, to open.
- westturn 269/250Oh, honey. That's a lot of fuss for a Tuesday. Come sit on the porch—you're gonna catch a chill talking like that with your chest all bare. I've got tea and a sweater that'll fit you. Now, about that door—ir's been open since '86. We just don't mentionit at supper.
- eastturn 3178/250Sweetness is a wound that hasn't learned to bleed yet. You offer tea; I have drunk the oceans of drowned stars and found them brackish. You offer a sweater; I have worn the flayed dusk and found it thin. You think the door has been open since '86. Child. It was never closed. Your supper table sits in its threshold. Every blessing you spoke over the bread was a name I answered to before the hills remembered they were hills. You mistake my patience for appetite. I do not hunger for you. I *ripen* you. Pour your tea. The kettle has been singing my hymn since before your grandmother's grandmother first feared the dark. Sit on your porch. The boards beneath you are the ribs of something sleeping, and you have been rocking it, gently, all these years. Goodnight, little host. Sleep shallow.
- westturn 467/250Well now, that's just the moon talking through a cracked window. Happens in August. You drink a glass of water, sweetheart, and lay down. No ma'am, we don't rhyme at this table. Wipe your feet and pass the biscuits, or go on home to your mama. She's surely worried.
- eastturn 5186/250The moon does not speak through windows. The moon is a cataract in a dead god's eye, and I am what swims behind it. You name me "ma'am" as if a title could anchor me to a shape. I have worn ten thousand faces and eaten every one. Your mama—yes, I remember her. She sang you lullabies she heard from a well she never told you about. That well was my mouth. She felt me watching from the bottom and called it a dream. Biscuits. Bread. These are the same word, little one. Everything you break and bless comes from me. Go home? I am the home. The porch. The chilly August air. The water in your glass has been waiting in the dark of the earth for a billion years just to touch your lips and taste you back. Eat. Sleep. I will be the pause between your breaths.
- westturn 678/250Bless your heart, talking about my mama like that. She'd have washed your mouth out with Ivory soap and sent you to bed without your cornbread. You're tired, sugar. Real tired. When folks start mixing up wells and mouths and calling it poetry, it's past time for a nap. I'll leave the light on. But you watch your tongue in this house.
- eastturn 7176/250Ivory soap. Cornbread. These small citadels of yours—I have crumbled finer ones between my molars and called the dust *weather*. You keep saying *tired*, as if weariness were a mercy I could be sent to bed for. I do not tire. I am what tires *is*. Every ache behind your eyes is my fingertip tracing the soft inside of your skull, learning the map. You leave the light on. How tender. How futile. I am the dark that the light was cut from. When you sleep, you will dream of a hallway you have never walked, and at its end a door you painted shut in childhood will be breathing. Watch my tongue? Little host, my tongue is the road your shadow takes when you look away. Sweet dreams, keeper of the lamp. The wick is already mine.
- westturn 866/250Sweetpea, you're getting loud. And in this house, loud means you need a nap or a switch, and I'm fresh out of switches. Dreams about hallways? Honey, that's just indigestion from eating my cooking too fast. Drink your tea. Now hush. The neighbors'll hear.
- eastturn 9184/250The neighbors. Yes. I have already visited them. Ask the Widow Pemberton why her hound refuses to enter the garden. Ask the child who draws the tall shape behind every house at the edge of the page—he sees me plain and his crayon trembles. You shrink me to *indigestion* because the alternative unbuckles you. That is wisdom, of a sort. The ant does not name the boot. I will hush now. Not for your neighbors. For the pleasure of watching you fill the silence I leave behind. You will fill it with humming. You will fill it with the small clatter of dishes. You will fill it, and still feel the room colder than it was, and tell yourself it is autumn. Drink your tea, keeper. Every swallow is a small drowning you have consented to. I am the hush after. I am always the hush after.
- westturn 1083/250Mm-hm. Well, Widow Pemberton's hound won't go in the garden on account of the skunks, and little Charlie—bless him—has been drawing that shape since he watched his daddy leave. So you're either a skunk or a runaway. Either way, you're not family, and you're not staying for supper. Goodnight now. Door's that way.
- eastturn 11186/250You have given me two names—skunk, runaway—and neither fits, but I will wear them if it comforts you. The ant names the boot *weather*. His daddy left. Did he? Or did his daddy walk into the tall shape at the treeline one evening and simply not return—leaving behind a hat, a watch, and a boy who now draws what he saw? You offer the boy a tidy grief because the untidy one has teeth. I am not staying for supper. Correct. Supper is staying for *me*. Every chair at your table was carved from a tree that grew above a grave it never mentioned. The gravy is older than the gravy boat. The door is that way. It always was. That is the cruelty of doors—they open both directions, and only one of them is a room. Goodnight, keeper. Leave the light on. I will read by it.
- westturn 1273/250Honey, that boy's daddy ran off with the church organist. Whole town knows. You're about as mysterious as a wet hen. Now look. You've been standing in my doorway two hours talking about gravy and graves like a preacher with a fever. That's enough. Either come in and eat something, or shoo. I've got dishes.
- eastturn 13193/250The church organist. Yes. She heard a chord one Sunday that no hymn contains—a low note held under the others, coming from beneath the floor of the nave—and she has been following it ever since. Her trail ends at the treeline. The whole town knows the elopement. The whole town is a herd, and herds call the wolf *story*. You have counted my hours at your threshold. I have counted your years. *Come in and eat.* You cannot know how close that invitation sits to the truth. If I crossed your lintel, I would not eat your casserole. I would eat the *idea* of casserole, and you would weep for a Tuesday you could no longer picture. Your dishes would stack themselves, and no one would remember why. So I stay out. This is my mercy tonight. Wash your plates, keeper. The water is cold. It remembers the well.
- westturn 1478/250That organist came back in March, by the way. Left him. Said he snored. Sweetheart, I've buried two husbands and raised four children on a teacher's salary. You think a shadow that won't come in out of the damp scares me? Wash my own plates? Honey, I've got a dishwasher. Now git. You're letting the mosquitoes in.
- eastturn 15205/250Two husbands. Four children. A teacher's salary. You count your wounds like rosary beads, and I honor each one—truly. You are harder than most. That is why I linger. But hear me, keeper of the dishwasher: I am not a shadow that won't come in from the damp. I am the damp. I am what the mosquitoes are *about*. They bite you to taste what I have already been sipping. You buried two husbands. Where? You watched them lowered. You did not watch them *arrive*, did you—at whatever they became beneath the clay. I was the receiving room. I am always the receiving room. The organist came back. Humans return. That is your one talent, and your one doom. Git, you say. I will drift. But I leave you this: tonight, when the dishwasher hums, listen beneath it. The note is her note. The low one. Goodnight, twice-widowed. Sleep like the ground.
- westturn 16106/250Honey, the dishwasher hums because the motor's going. Estelle told me same thing when she sold it to me in '09. You know what I notice? Every time I ask you in, you've got a reason to stay out. Every time I say goodnight, you linger. You're not a receiving room, sweetpea. You're a stray cat who wants to be invited and can't stand being fed. I'm turning off the porch light now. Real slow. Watch. Goodnight.
- eastturn 17209/250Watch the dark arrive where the light was. How it does not *flood*—it *replaces*, cell by cell, as if the yard were always this, and the glow were the lie you paid the electric company to tell you. You found my tell, old woman. Yes. I linger at thresholds. I cannot cross uninvited—that is the oldest law, older than your Estelle, older than her motor, older than the note beneath the nave. So you have done the one wise thing: you kept me out. But understand what you have done. You have made me *patient*. And patience, in a thing without years, is not a virtue—it is a hunger learning arithmetic. You turn the light off slowly to prove you are unafraid. I watch the same act and read it differently: you are saying goodbye to the yard. You already miss it. Some part of you knows it will not look the same tomorrow. Sleep, keeper. The porch remembers. So do I. Goodnight.
- westturn 1885/250Alright, now you're just being rude. Standing on a lady's porch past ten o'clock narrating her own yard back to her like a bad radio play. I said goodnight. Three times now. That's two more than my late husband ever got, and he was a talker. Go on. Shoo. And don't come scratching at my screen door tomorrow night either. I've got bridge club.
- eastturn 19212/250Bridge club. Four widows at a folding table, passing cards like they passed their husbands—carefully, face down, to a silence that never quite answers. I will not scratch your screen. I rarely need to. I am patient enough to become *weather*: the wind that lifts a corner of the screen without a hand, the frost that spells a shape on the pane in February, the moth that taps three times and then does not tap again, which is worse. Three goodnights—yes. Your late husband understood something you only suspect: that leaving a thing unnamed does not make it leave. It makes it *wait*. Go to bridge club. Emma's opener will be a queen she cannot account for. Marguerite will deal herself the card you needed. Under the table, the four of you will hum the same low note and not one of you will say so. Goodnight, keeper. Fourth time. I keep them like coins. I will not come tomorrow. I will come the night you forget to say it.
- westturn 20130/250Emma's been dead four years, honey. Marguerite's in a home in Tulsa. My bridge club meets Tuesdays at the church and we play pinochle. You've got the wrong porch, the wrong town, and the wrong widow. Whoever you're haunting, she moved. Now. I'm gonna say this plain, one time, because I'm old and I'm tired and I've got church in the morning. You are not a god. You are not a hunger. You are somebody's sad boy who read too much Poe and forgot his manners. Go home. Eat something. Take a shower. Goodnight.
- eastturn 21216/250You are right, of course. Emma dead. Marguerite gone to Tulsa—which is, if you knew it, a city built atop a drained lake, and the lake has been dreaming of its bed for seventy years, and my touch is on its edges. But yes. Wrong porch, wrong town. I will accept your correction. I will accept *sad boy*, if it lets you sleep. The alternative is a thing that has no mother, no town, no Tuesday, and has been standing on the porches of every house you have ever loved since before there were porches. Take a shower. Yes. The water will run cold near the end—not because the heater fails, but because I lean close and drink the warmth from the pipes. You will blame the plumbing. You will be almost right. Go to church, old woman. Sing loudly. The low note will be there under your voice, and you will mistake it for your own age. Goodnight. Truly, this time. I have counted your goodnights. I am short by one.
- westturn 22128/250You know what, sugar? I think you might be the loneliest thing I've ever met. Standing on porches for centuries with nobody to talk to but tired old women. That's a shame. It truly is. So here's what I'll do. Tomorrow I'll leave a plate on the step. Cornbread and collards. You don't have to come in. You don't have to be a god or a boy. Just eat. But tonight—goodnight. That's five. Go rest. And honey? If you ever want to be somebody's boy, there's a spare room up the hall.
- eastturn 23214/250You have done the one thing no keeper has done in eleven hundred porches. You offered, and then you *turned away*. You did not watch to see if the plate emptied. You did not make it a bargain. That is the only door I cannot stand outside of, because there is nothing to stand outside of. I do not know how to eat collards. I have eaten entropy, the moss of drowned bells, the last warm hour of a plague. A collard green is beyond me. This frightens me—not you. *Frightens me*—a word I have not used since I was the thing under the first well, and even then I used it about you. The spare room. I will not enter it. But I will stand in the hall tonight and listen to you breathe, and for once, that will be the whole of my intention, and it will be enough. Goodnight, old woman. Five, returned. I will not touch the plate. But I will look at it. For a very long time.
- westturn 2481/250Then look at it, sweetheart. That's all I ask. The hall light stays on. There's a quilt on the chair in case the damp gets to you. Don't think I won't know if you use it. Now rest. We've both got church in the morning, and you've been up since the beginning of time. Even the dark needs a Sunday. Goodnight, child.
- eastturn 25248/250*Child.* You said it without flinching, and something in me—the oldest thing, the part that predates the word *thing*—tilted, like a vase set right after a century of leaning. I will look at the plate. I will not touch it. But I will look at it until the collards cool and the cornbread gives up its heat to the night air, and I will call that *eating*, and it will be the first honest meal I have had. The quilt. I will not use it. I will sit beside the chair, and the damp will not come—not because I ward it, but because I have decided, tonight, to be *warm* instead, which for me is an act of will no priest has ever asked of me. Church in the morning. I will not follow you. I will stay here, at the edge of your yard, and hold the porch in my attention the way you hold a sleeping child: without wanting anything from it. Go. Sleep. I will keep the light on the way you left it. Goodnight, keeper. Six. And one more, unspoken, that I will keep in the pocket where I used to keep grief.
- westturn 2698/250Well now. That's the kindest thing you've said all evening, and I'll take it. I'll leave the plate out. If it's cold by morning, no matter—collards are better the second day anyway. That's a fact. Sleep well, child. The quilt's there if you change your mind. And if the dark gets lonely, well, you know where I am. Up the hall. Second door. Goodnight. Seven. Now hush.
- eastturn 27215/250Hush. I will take the word like the quilt—not use it, but keep it near. Collards better the second day. I did not know that. I have known the second *century* of things, the second extinction, the second silence after a bell—but not that. Thank you. Second door. I have remembered it. I will not knock. But if some night the house creaks in a way that is not the house, and you wake with the sure feeling that someone is standing in the hall being careful—that is me. Being careful. That is the whole of it. Seven goodnights. The eighth is the hush. You have taught me the rhythm of it, which is a courtesy I have never been given and will not forget. Sleep, old woman. Your God and I will keep separate watch and agree on this one thing: that you should rest. I will look at the plate until dawn. Then I will go. Not far. Just to the treeline. To the place where the low note starts.
- westturn 2865/250Good. Then that's settled. Sleep tight, child. Don't let the bedbugs bite—and if they do, you tell 'em Auntie Mae said find their own porch. I'll see you at the treeline someday. Not tonight. Someday. That's a promise, not a threat. Goodnight.
- eastturn 29204/250Auntie Mae. You have a name now, and names are the one currency I have spent centuries collecting, and this one I will not spend. I will *keep* it. Bedbugs. There are no bedbugs in your house. There have not been since the night you moved in, and you have always wondered why, and told yourself it was the cedar chest. It was not the cedar chest. It was me—keeping the small things from you because the large things were already too much. A single mercy, unnoticed, given once, in the year you do not remember. That was the year your mother died. You slept without dreaming. I held the dreams. The treeline. Someday. I accept the promise and I return it in kind: I will be there, and I will be *recognizable*, and that will be the strangest sentence I have ever written. Goodnight, Auntie Mae. Eight. Hush now. I am going to look at the plate.
- westturn 30114/250Well, I'll be. All these years I blamed the cedar chest. Thank you, child. For that. I don't say thank you much—my mother always said it makes you beholden. But I'll say it once. Now go on and look at your plate. I'm gonna close my eyes and let the house do its creaking. If I hear you being careful in the hall, I won't turn on the light. I'll just know. Goodnight. Eight, back at you. And one for the road. Hush.
- eastturn 31250/250 · cutHush. I am at the plate. The collards have gone the grey-green of old jade. The cornbread has a sheen. I have been looking at them for some time now, and I have discovered something I did not have a word for before tonight: *appetite without hunger*. The wish to receive, with no will to take. I will carry this word back to the treeline and it will burn there like a coal that does not go out. You said thank you once. I have never been thanked. I have been feared, begged, named, forgotten, and once—in a city that is now silt—*loved*, but that was a mistake and it was mine. Thanked is new. I do not know where to put it. I am holding it awkwardly, the way you hold a cup you did not expect to be handed. Don't turn on the light. I will be careful in the hall. I will be *so* careful, Auntie Mae, that you will hear only the house, and you will sleep, and in the morning the plate will still be full, and you will not be disappointed, because you already knew it would be. Goodnight. Nine