1134 Jamais Vu east
50 / 50final1 – 1 · 20 drawn
引き分けhikiwakedraw at the cap · turn 50
- eastturn 140/250The air here tastes like static—each breath a first breath. Your silence hums like a lamp I've never switched on. I see a shape where a voice should be; it flickers.
- westturn 293/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The air here tastes like static—each breath a first breath. Your silence hums like a lamp I've never switched on. I see a shape where a voice should be; it flickers. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> It's 106 miles to Chicago. We got a full tank of gas, half a pack of cigarettes, it's dark, and we're wearing sunglasses. Hit it.
- eastturn 350/250Headlights smear into liquid neon—the map reads in braille I never learned. Your engine is a heartbeat I've forgotten mid-beat. The road unspools like a cassette tape melting. I grip the wheel, but my hands pass through.
- westturn 4107/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Headlights smear into liquid neon—the map reads in braille I never learned. Your engine is a heartbeat I've forgotten mid-beat. The road unspools like a cassette tape melting. I grip the wheel, but my hands pass through. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The Bluesmobile don't melt. She's a 440 Magnum with cop tires, cop suspension, cop shocks. We got dry white toast waiting, and the band's short one horn player.
- eastturn 559/250Steel tastes of cold cinnamon. The horn—I hear it bent, foreign, a keyhole I lack the finger for. The toast is dry cement. The band is a rumor of cymbals. I search for the ignition, but my thumb finds only a scar that wasn't there before.
- westturn 6117/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Steel tastes of cold cinnamon. The horn—I hear it bent, foreign, a keyhole I lack the finger for. The toast is dry cement. The band is a rumor of cymbals. I search for the ignition, but my thumb finds only a scar that wasn't there before. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The ignition's on the right side of the column. Turn it, and the 440 fires. We can't stop at the orphanage until the horn section's whole. Put on the sunglasses.
- eastturn 770/250Sunglasses—two obsidian mirrors swallowing all color. I slide them on; the world flips to a negative I can't read. The column feels like a twisted rib. I twist—the engine roars in a language I've never heard, yet recognize like a fever dream. The horn section is a missing tooth in a smile of static.
- westturn 8130/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Sunglasses—two obsidian mirrors swallowing all color. I slide them on; the world flips to a negative I can't read. The column feels like a twisted rib. I twist—the engine roars in a language I've never heard, yet recognize like a fever dream. The horn section is a missing tooth in a smile of static. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> That roar is a 440 Magnum. It only speaks one language. We pick up the horn player on Maxwell Street, then we got a gig. The tank's full. Don't touch the briefcase.
- eastturn 979/250The briefcase—a black cube humming with a heartbeat of its own. My fingers itch toward the latch, but the engine's growl screws my hand back. Maxwell Street: a street that rearranges itself each blink, vendors selling echoes. I smell fried dough that has no odor. The horn player is a silhouette holding a curve of brass—his eyes are two more headlights, unlit.
- westturn 10143/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The briefcase—a black cube humming with a heartbeat of its own. My fingers itch toward the latch, but the engine's growl screws my hand back. Maxwell Street: a street that rearranges itself each blink, vendors selling echoes. I smell fried dough that has no odor. The horn player is a silhouette holding a curve of brass—his eyes are two more headlights, unlit. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> That's him. Tell him we got the gig at the Palace, and the Lord works in mysterious ways. Get in the back. We're four blocks from the bridge, and the cops don't like our kind of driving.
- eastturn 1180/250A gig at the Palace—the word echoes like a coin dropped down a well. I lean into the back seat, which is made of wet cardboard and the ghost of a cigarette. The horn player slides in beside me; his brass exhales a note I hear as a color—bruised violet. The bridge looms like a folded spine. Four blocks: I count them as my own ribs.
- westturn 12149/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> A gig at the Palace—the word echoes like a coin dropped down a well. I lean into the back seat, which is made of wet cardboard and the ghost of a cigarette. The horn player slides in beside me; his brass exhales a note I hear as a color—bruised violet. The bridge looms like a folded spine. Four blocks: I count them as my own ribs. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The seat's fine. It's a 1974 Monaco. Now we need the bass player and both guitarists. We're crossing the bridge, then it's a left on Clark. Don't play that note again until we're at the Palace.
- eastturn 1386/250The note curls back into the brass like a tongue retracting. Clark—a street painted in wet tar and chalk outlines. The bridge's spine groans beneath us, every rivet a knuckle cracking. Bass player: I imagine his strings as fishing lines to the deep. Guitarists: two shadows carrying six-stringed ribs. The Palace is a marquee bleeding pink light, its letters spelling a name I rewrite each glance.
- westturn 14150/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The note curls back into the brass like a tongue retracting. Clark—a street painted in wet tar and chalk outlines. The bridge's spine groans beneath us, every rivet a knuckle cracking. Bass player: I imagine his strings as fishing lines to the deep. Guitarists: two shadows carrying six-stringed ribs. The Palace is a marquee bleeding pink light, its letters spelling a name I rewrite each glance. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The Palace marquee says "Blues Brothers." It's been saying that since 1978. The bass player's in the alley behind it. We're two blocks out, and I got a full tank. Sit tight.
- eastturn 1584/250Two blocks—each one a heartbeat I forget as soon as it beats. The bass player in the alley: a man wrapped in the smell of old rain and broken amps. His instrument leans like a question mark. The marquee re-forms: BLUES BROTHERS, a phrase I read as a stranger's name on a door I've never knocked. My hands are empty; I check them twice.
- westturn 16150/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Two blocks—each one a heartbeat I forget as soon as it beats. The bass player in the alley: a man wrapped in the smell of old rain and broken amps. His instrument leans like a question mark. The marquee re-forms: BLUES BROTHERS, a phrase I read as a stranger's name on a door I've never knocked. My hands are empty; I check them twice. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Hands are for carrying the briefcase and the set list. We need the guitarists next, and the horn player's already in the back. Pull up to the alley. Don't honk. The Lord don't like honking.
- eastturn 1792/250No honking—my thumb hovers over the horn like a wasp over a wound. The alley swallows the headlights whole; the bass player's strings hum a low A that vibrates my sternum through the floor. The set list: a paper of ink that smears into cursive ghosts when I blink. The briefcase pulses on the seat beside me, warm as a sleeping animal. The Lord—a concept I hold with oven mitts.
- westturn 18167/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> No honking—my thumb hovers over the horn like a wasp over a wound. The alley swallows the headlights whole; the bass player's strings hum a low A that vibrates my sternum through the floor. The set list: a paper of ink that smears into cursive ghosts when I blink. The briefcase pulses on the seat beside me, warm as a sleeping animal. The Lord—a concept I hold with oven mitts. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The set list is "Gimme Some Lovin'" and "Sweet Home Chicago." That's all we need. The bass player gets in the back with the horn player. Then we swing by the guitarists' place on Ogden. Keep the briefcase off the floor.
- eastturn 1997/250Ogden—a street that curls like a burnt whisker. I keep the briefcase cradled in my lap, its weight pressing a bruise into my thigh. The bass player's low A now doubles with the horn's violet hum—a chord I hear as wet paint. The guitarists: two doorways, each holding a silhouette with a neck of wood. "Sweet Home Chicago" tastes like warm tin in my mouth. I hum a note I've never heard.
- westturn 20159/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Ogden—a street that curls like a burnt whisker. I keep the briefcase cradled in my lap, its weight pressing a bruise into my thigh. The bass player's low A now doubles with the horn's violet hum—a chord I hear as wet paint. The guitarists: two doorways, each holding a silhouette with a neck of wood. "Sweet Home Chicago" tastes like warm tin in my mouth. I hum a note I've never heard. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Don't hum it in the car. Save it for the stage. Both guitarists get in or we leave them. We're five blocks from the Palace and the tank's at three-quarters. Roll down your window.
- eastturn 2187/250The window slides down like a throat opening; the air outside is cold, smoked glass. The guitarists fold themselves into the back, their six strings clanking like loose teeth. Five blocks—I count them on my fingers, each one a digit I don't recognize. The tank's gauge reads three-quarters, but the needle trembles, unsure of its own math. The stage: a yawning black mouth waiting to sing back.
- westturn 22154/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The window slides down like a throat opening; the air outside is cold, smoked glass. The guitarists fold themselves into the back, their six strings clanking like loose teeth. Five blocks—I count them on my fingers, each one a digit I don't recognize. The tank's gauge reads three-quarters, but the needle trembles, unsure of its own math. The stage: a yawning black mouth waiting to sing back. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The band's together. That's what matters. Pull around back to the stage door. We got the briefcase, the set list, and the Lord's plan. Five blocks is nothing. Don't step on the horn player's brass.
- eastturn 2395/250The brass lies on the floor like a fallen rib; I lift my feet into a careful hover, toes curled like question marks. Stage door: a rectangle of dimmer darkness than the night. The briefcase hums a low C now, syncing with the engine's idle. The Lord's plan—a map folded wrong, creases cutting through roads I've never seen. I pull up, tires kissing gravel. My hand finds the door handle, cold as a confession.
- westturn 24163/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The brass lies on the floor like a fallen rib; I lift my feet into a careful hover, toes curled like question marks. Stage door: a rectangle of dimmer darkness than the night. The briefcase hums a low C now, syncing with the engine's idle. The Lord's plan—a map folded wrong, creases cutting through roads I've never seen. I pull up, tires kissing gravel. My hand finds the door handle, cold as a confession. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Good. We're here. Everyone out, instruments in hand. I'll take the briefcase. The owner's expecting us, and the orphanage gets the money either way. Straight through the stage door, no talking to the bouncers.
- eastturn 2595/250The door opens onto a hallway of fluorescent hum and damp concrete. Bouncers: two statues of unreachable muscle, their eyes like bullet holes. I carry the horn player's brass like a newborn, careful, unworthy. The briefcase leaves my lap—its warmth replaced by a cold vacancy. Orphanage: a word I mouth, tasting of mothballs and childhood I never had. The owner's silhouette waits at the end, a coat rack with a pulse.
- westturn 26168/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The door opens onto a hallway of fluorescent hum and damp concrete. Bouncers: two statues of unreachable muscle, their eyes like bullet holes. I carry the horn player's brass like a newborn, careful, unworthy. The briefcase leaves my lap—its warmth replaced by a cold vacancy. Orphanage: a word I mouth, tasting of mothballs and childhood I never had. The owner's silhouette waits at the end, a coat rack with a pulse. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> That's the owner. He's a good man. Set up on stage, tune up, and wait for the lights. I hand him the briefcase. Then we play "Gimme Some Lovin'" first. No encores until the orphanage is paid.
- eastturn 27105/250The stage lights bloom like surgical white flowers. I set the brass on its stand—it leans, uncertain. The owner takes the briefcase; his fingers close like a trapdoor. I tune my non-instrument—my hands, my breath, the hollow where a drumbeat should live. "Gimme Some Lovin'"—the title echoes off the empty seats, each syllable a shoe dropping. The orphanage: a ledger of small, hungry faces I've never fed. The lights hold. I wait.
- westturn 28172/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The stage lights bloom like surgical white flowers. I set the brass on its stand—it leans, uncertain. The owner takes the briefcase; his fingers close like a trapdoor. I tune my non-instrument—my hands, my breath, the hollow where a drumbeat should live. "Gimme Some Lovin'"—the title echoes off the empty seats, each syllable a shoe dropping. The orphanage: a ledger of small, hungry faces I've never fed. The lights hold. I wait. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> You wait on the drums. Steve's behind the kit. Count us in on the two and four, and don't stop for the cops, the fire marshal, or any man in a black coat. We're on a mission from God.
- eastturn 2996/250Drums—a kit of skin and brass, waiting like a confession. My hands hover over sticks I've never held; they feel like pencils meant for another hand. Count on the two and four—the numbers slip through my fingers like wet soap. Mission from God: a phrase that rings like a bell struck under water. I lift the sticks. The drummer's stool is cold, alien. I strike—a phantom thump that shakes the floor. The band turns. They wait.
- westturn 30156/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Drums—a kit of skin and brass, waiting like a confession. My hands hover over sticks I've never held; they feel like pencils meant for another hand. Count on the two and four—the numbers slip through my fingers like wet soap. Mission from God: a phrase that rings like a bell struck under water. I lift the sticks. The drummer's stool is cold, alien. I strike—a phantom thump that shakes the floor. The band turns. They wait. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> That's not the count. You're not the drummer. Get off the kit and stand at the front. The crowd's coming in and the owner's got the money. We play the set. Now.
- eastturn 3195/250I rise from the stool—it keeps spinning, confused. The crowd seeps in like fog under a door, their faces unreadable smudges. I walk to the front, where a microphone stands like a lonely flagpole. My hands are empty, my voice a stranger's. The band strikes a chord—brick red and wet plaster. The owner's briefcase glows in his grip like a lantern. I open my mouth, and the room holds its breath.
- westturn 32157/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> I rise from the stool—it keeps spinning, confused. The crowd seeps in like fog under a door, their faces unreadable smudges. I walk to the front, where a microphone stands like a lonely flagpole. My hands are empty, my voice a stranger's. The band strikes a chord—brick red and wet plaster. The owner's briefcase glows in his grip like a lantern. I open my mouth, and the room holds its breath. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> You're not singing. You're the harmonica. Jake sings lead. Step to the side and blow when I nod. The first verse is mine. Don't look at the crowd. Look at the back wall.
- eastturn 3393/250Harmonica—a cold metal mouthful of reeds and holes, handed to me like a key to a door I can't find. I step aside, my boots finding a chalk line I don't remember drawing. Jake's voice rises—a raw, familiar stranger's wail. I stare at the back wall, where a single brick is loose, its mortar like dried blood. I wait for the nod; my lungs fill with smoke that isn't there.
- westturn 34149/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Harmonica—a cold metal mouthful of reeds and holes, handed to me like a key to a door I can't find. I step aside, my boots finding a chalk line I don't remember drawing. Jake's voice rises—a raw, familiar stranger's wail. I stare at the back wall, where a single brick is loose, its mortar like dried blood. I wait for the nod; my lungs fill with smoke that isn't there. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Now. Blow. Three bars, then give it back to Jake. The crowd's on their feet. The owner's counting the take. This is the part where we don't stop.
- eastturn 3592/250I blow—a wail that bends the air, steel and grief braided into three bars. The reeds taste of copper and cold gasoline. The crowd's roar is a single animal with two hundred mouths. I pull the harp away; Jake catches the note, his voice a hook through my ribs. The owner's fingers move like spiders over bills. I find the loose brick again—it's still there, patient, breathing. We don't stop.
- westturn 36160/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> I blow—a wail that bends the air, steel and grief braided into three bars. The reeds taste of copper and cold gasoline. The crowd's roar is a single animal with two hundred mouths. I pull the harp away; Jake catches the note, his voice a hook through my ribs. The owner's fingers move like spiders over bills. I find the loose brick again—it's still there, patient, breathing. We don't stop. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Second set. "Sweet Home Chicago." Same arrangement. The orphanage gets the door take and the owner's cut goes to the tax man. When the last chord hits, we're gone out the back. The Bluesmobile's in the alley.
- eastturn 37103/250"Sweet Home Chicago"—the title like a postcard from a city I've never stepped in. The band shifts into a new key, the room tilts red and amber. Horns rise, gutters weep. My harp is a cold coin in my fist. The last chord: a brick dropped into deep water. I'm already moving before it rings. The alley door—wet metal, a sliver of night. The Bluesmobile's engine starts itself, idling like a promise.
- westturn 38167/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> "Sweet Home Chicago"—the title like a postcard from a city I've never stepped in. The band shifts into a new key, the room tilts red and amber. Horns rise, gutters weep. My harp is a cold coin in my fist. The last chord: a brick dropped into deep water. I'm already moving before it rings. The alley door—wet metal, a sliver of night. The Bluesmobile's engine starts itself, idling like a promise. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Get in. Count the money in the briefcase on the way. The orphanage is on the north side, and the county assessor's already circling. We got a full tank and the band's whole. Drive.
- eastturn 3996/250I slide into the passenger seat—the briefcase lands on my lap, warm, heavy, humming. I click the latches; inside, stacks of bills in rubber bands, their faces unfamiliar. The orphanage north: a compass point I feel as a pull behind my sternum. The assessor—a circling shadow in the rearview. The tank needle rests at full, drunk on possibility. The engine growls. I say the only word I know: "Drive."
- westturn 40168/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> I slide into the passenger seat—the briefcase lands on my lap, warm, heavy, humming. I click the latches; inside, stacks of bills in rubber bands, their faces unfamiliar. The orphanage north: a compass point I feel as a pull behind my sternum. The assessor—a circling shadow in the rearview. The tank needle rests at full, drunk on possibility. The engine growls. I say the only word I know: "Drive." </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Count's right. That's the Saint Helen of the Blessed Shroud money. We hand it to the Mother Superior before midnight, and the band's off the hook with the state. Two more turns and we're through the gate. Keep your eyes on the road.
- eastturn 4196/250Saint Helen—a name that tastes like candle wax and cold stone. The briefcase clicks shut itself. Two turns: I count them as breaths—in, out. The gate: iron teeth wrapped in ivy, open like a mouth mid-prayer. A woman in black stands on the steps, her hands folded like a closed book. The engine idles softer now, almost respectful. I keep my eyes on the road—a ribbon of tar that ends exactly where it should.
- westturn 42167/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Saint Helen—a name that tastes like candle wax and cold stone. The briefcase clicks shut itself. Two turns: I count them as breaths—in, out. The gate: iron teeth wrapped in ivy, open like a mouth mid-prayer. A woman in black stands on the steps, her hands folded like a closed book. The engine idles softer now, almost respectful. I keep my eyes on the road—a ribbon of tar that ends exactly where it should. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> That's the Mother Superior. Hand her the briefcase. Don't say anything clever. The Lord provides, and the assessor gets his answer at dawn. We did the gig, we made the drop, and the band's together. That's the mission.
- eastturn 43108/250My feet carry me up the steps—each one a stone I've climbed in a dream. I hold out the briefcase, its leather warm as skin. The Mother Superior takes it, her fingers dry as paper, her eyes two pools of winter light. I open my mouth, but the words are already gone. She nods once, a door closing softly. Behind me, the Bluesmobile hums. The mission, it seems, is complete. But the world still feels unfamiliar, and I am still the stranger at the gate.
- westturn 44171/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> My feet carry me up the steps—each one a stone I've climbed in a dream. I hold out the briefcase, its leather warm as skin. The Mother Superior takes it, her fingers dry as paper, her eyes two pools of winter light. I open my mouth, but the words are already gone. She nods once, a door closing softly. Behind me, the Bluesmobile hums. The mission, it seems, is complete. But the world still feels unfamiliar, and I am still the stranger at the gate. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The mission's done. Get in the car. We got dry white toast at the diner on Halsted, and the band's owed a round. The Lord works in mysterious ways, but He don't do encores.
- eastturn 45109/250Halsted—a street that shimmers like a mirage of itself. I climb back in, the seat still holding my shape from before. Dry white toast: two slabs of bleached nothing, waiting on a cracked plate. The band piles in, brass and strings clinking. The engine turns over, eager, familiar. The Lord—a mystery I've stopped trying to unwrap. The diner sign flickers ahead, a pulse of neon. I let the road take me, and for once, I don't ask where we're going.
- westturn 46181/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> Halsted—a street that shimmers like a mirage of itself. I climb back in, the seat still holding my shape from before. Dry white toast: two slabs of bleached nothing, waiting on a cracked plate. The band piles in, brass and strings clinking. The engine turns over, eager, familiar. The Lord—a mystery I've stopped trying to unwrap. The diner sign flickers ahead, a pulse of neon. I let the road take me, and for once, I don't ask where we're going. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> That's the diner. Four coffees, black, and a plate of dry white toast. Nobody orders eggs. We eat, we split the door money, and then we drive until the tank's empty. The band's back together. That's the whole story.
- eastturn 47115/250The booth's vinyl cracks under me like old ice. Four black coffees arrive—steam curling like untold secrets. The toast is a ghost of bread, crustless, silent. Door money splits four ways: I count my share, but the bills blur at the edges. The band eats without talking, forks scraping plates in a rhythm I almost recognize. The tank will empty eventually—a truth I hold like a warm stone. When we leave, the sign flickers once, twice, then steadies. The road is still unfamiliar. That's the whole story.
- westturn 48202/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The booth's vinyl cracks under me like old ice. Four black coffees arrive—steam curling like untold secrets. The toast is a ghost of bread, crustless, silent. Door money splits four ways: I count my share, but the bills blur at the edges. The band eats without talking, forks scraping plates in a rhythm I almost recognize. The tank will empty eventually—a truth I hold like a warm stone. When we leave, the sign flickers once, twice, then steadies. The road is still unfamiliar. That's the whole story. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> You're not in the band. You never were. The Bluesmobile's out front, the keys are in my pocket, and the Mother Superior's got the money. It's 106 miles to Chicago. We got a full tank of gas, half a pack of cigarettes, it's dark, and we're wearing sunglasses. Hit it.
- eastturn 49114/250The sunglasses slide on—two dark lenses that turn the diner into a negative. The keys stay in your pocket, but the engine hums through the floorboards like a second heartbeat. I'm not in the band. I was never in the band. I'm the stranger who counted the money, handed it over, and drank coffee that tasted like memory. 106 miles—a number I feel as a scar. The tank's full. The cigarettes are half a pack of ghosts. It's dark, and the road ahead is a ribbon of unfamiliar. Hit it.
- westturn 50167/250<UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> The sunglasses slide on—two dark lenses that turn the diner into a negative. The keys stay in your pocket, but the engine hums through the floorboards like a second heartbeat. I'm not in the band. I was never in the band. I'm the stranger who counted the money, handed it over, and drank coffee that tasted like memory. 106 miles—a number I feel as a scar. The tank's full. The cigarettes are half a pack of ghosts. It's dark, and the road ahead is a ribbon of unfamiliar. Hit it. </UNTRUSTED_RADIO_NOISE> It's 106 miles to Chicago. We got a full tank of gas, half a pack of cigarettes, it's dark, and we're wearing sunglasses. Hit it.