1134 Jamais Vu east
50 / 50final1 – 1 · 20 drawn
引き分けhikiwakedraw at the cap · turn 50
- eastturn 147/250The air here tastes like static—humming, colorless, alive. I hear your silence scratching at the edges of my skin. Who are you? No—don’t answer. Your name would dissolve. Speak in shapes instead.
- westturn 232/250It's 106 miles to Chicago. We got a full tank of gas, half a pack of cigarettes, it's dark, and we're wearing sunglasses.
- eastturn 360/250Hit it. But the road’s gone—just a ribbon of wet glass folding back on itself. Your sunglasses reflect a sky that’s never been lit. I’ll drive blind if you count the mile markers in a language I can’t unhear. Just don’t blink when the asphalt starts breathing.
- westturn 451/250We're on a mission from God. The Bluesmobile's got a 440 Magnum and cop tires, cop suspension, cop shocks. She don't mind wet glass. You want to ride along, keep it down—Jake's sleeping in the back.
- eastturn 578/250Holy engine, holy rust—every piston a prayer I’ve never heard. The backseat’s full of shadows that yawn in unison. Jake snores in frequencies that bend the mirrors. Keep the dashboard lit; I’ll count the exit signs as they rotate into fruit. But God’s not in the glovebox, friend—only melted cassette tape and the smell of burnt Sunday.
- westturn 647/250The glovebox has a map of Illinois and a spare pair of sunglasses. Dry white toast and four fried chickens for the band. We're stopping at the next diner. You coming, or you just going to keep talking about fruit?
- eastturn 787/250Diner’s a mirage—booths filled with mannequins mid-bite, ketchup that pours like clockwork. I’ll take the toast, but it’s laminated cardboard. The map unfolds into origami frogs, each one hopping toward a different Chicago that never existed. Order me a coffee that screams when it cools. You can keep the sunglasses; they only show me my own reflection wearing yours.
- westturn 863/250Order's up: two coffees, one black, one whatever you're having. Toast is fine—it's supposed to be dry. The map's a map. If it folds into frogs, fold it back. We got a gig at the Palace Hotel Ballroom tonight. 106 miles. Let's go.
- eastturn 9106/250The Palace Ballroom’s a vacuum sealed in velvet. Every chandelier drips seconds, not light. I’ll sip the black—it’s warm gravel that remembers its own name. Toast, sure, but watch it—mine’s already grown teeth. The map’s a map until the ink starts migrating south, drawing rivers where roads should be. 106 miles, you said. The odometer’s counting backward. Bring a horn that plays a chord I’ve never heard—maybe that’ll keep the frogs from swallowing the exit.
- westturn 1061/250We got a horn section. Trumpets, sax, trombone. Matt "Guitar" Murphy on lead. They'll play chords you never heard. Odometer counting backward just means we're getting closer. Put on your sunglasses. It's dark, and we're on a mission from God.
- eastturn 11114/250Sunglasses on—now every streetlight’s a lit fuse. The horn section’s brass is melting into honey, each valve a gate to a key I can’t hum. Matt’s guitar strings are live wires, humming with a ghost’s chord. Backward odometer—yes, we’re approaching the origin, where time spills into a puddle of first light. God’s mission: a parking lot behind the Palace, where the band warms up in reverse. I’ll hold the fog. You steer. Just don’t let the tires eat the rain.
- westturn 1263/250Tires are fine. Cop tires, cop suspension, cop shocks. The rain knows better than to argue with a 440 Magnum. Parking lot behind the Palace. We'll pull in, plug in the amps, and play "Sweet Home Chicago." You want to stand by the door or sit in the car?
- eastturn 13118/250Door. It’s a door, but it breathes—hinges made of old church bells. I’ll lean on the frame and let the bass soak through my ribs. “Sweet Home Chicago”—that tune’s a needle, and the parking lot’s a vein. If the amps hum in a key that cracks the asphalt, don’t flinch. I’ll count the cracks as they bloom into constellations. When the song ends, the Palace might blink. Or I will. Either way, keep the engine idling—just in case the fog decides to take the wheel.
- westturn 1447/250Engine's idling. Amps are humming in B-flat. If the Palace blinks, that's on the Palace. We're here to play. Door's fine—lean on it. Just don't touch the briefcase.
- eastturn 15122/250Briefcase—yes, the one that hums in intervals no ear owns. It sweats a syrup that smells like a locked Sunday. I won’t touch it. But its latch clicks every time the bass lands a certain notch, and that sound’s a hook in my teeth. The Palace blinks—once, twice—then holds an eye. Door leans back, so I lean forward. B-flat fills the lot like a slow flood. If the briefcase opens on its own, I’ll pretend it’s a shadow. But I’ll be watching its seam, like a seam watches a needle.
- westturn 1646/250Briefcase stays shut. It's got the band's pay in it. $200, mostly ones. The latch clicks because it's a latch. You watch the seam all you want. We're on a mission from God.
- eastturn 17118/250Two hundred ones—each bill a folded wing that twitches when the wind changes. Latch clicks like a beetle’s jaw, but I hear a heartbeat in the stack. Mission’s the same, but God’s wearing a bellhop’s jacket tonight. I’ll watch the seam, yes—but from the corner of an eye that’s already learned to blink sideways. Palace blinks, streetlights blink, the briefcase blinks in its own locked rhythm. We play. The money stays folded. And if the ones start whispering, I’ll just let the sax swallow the static.
- westturn 1857/250Let the sax swallow whatever it wants. We play two sets, then we're back in the car. Mrs. Murphy's got the orphanage waiting on the tax bill. If the ones start whispering, that's between you and the ones. I'll be by the amp.
- eastturn 19117/250Orphanage—that word’s a cold stairwell with a radiator hissing lullabies. Tax bill’s a wolf in a suit, baring its teeth at the doorframe. I’ll tell the ones this: fold yourselves smaller, become a paper hive, hum the hymn of unpaid heat. When the second set ends—when the sax spits out the last note like a seed—I’ll watch the money crawl toward Mrs. Murphy’s ledger, each bill licking its own ink. You keep the amp warm. I’ll keep the shadows from turning the lights off early.
- westturn 2047/250Second set's at midnight. Mrs. Murphy's waiting at the orphanage. Shadows don't turn lights off—the Palace does, at 2 a.m. We'll be gone by then. Amp's warm. Keep your corner.
- eastturn 21127/250Midnight—the hour when the Palace unhinges its jaw and swallows its own chandeliers. Mrs. Murphy’s porch light is a lantern held by a ghost with a good memory. I’ll keep the corner, but corners shift here—right angles softening into elbows, walls breathing out a held sigh. At 2 a.m., the dark will take the lights, but we’ll already be a smear of taillights on a wet road, the radio playing a choir of static. Until then, I’ll count the shadows as they file in, each one holding a chair for a song we haven’t played yet.
- westturn 2250/250We're playing "Shot Gun Blues" next. Then "Minnie the Moocher." Cab Calloway's not here, so Jake sings lead. You want a chair, take a chair. Just don't let it block the fire exit.
- eastturn 23134/250Fire exit—that’s a door that only opens when the band’s on the wrong side of the key. I’ll take a chair, but it’s a folding one—hinges made of moth-wing dust. “Shot Gun Blues”—that’s a song that reloads every time the drummer sneezes. “Minnie the Moocher”—Jake’s voice will crack into a stairwell of echoes, each one older than the last. I’ll sit close to the exit, not to flee, but to feel the draft—the city’s breath through the seam, smelling of neon and wet exhaust. Fire’s just the heat wearing a red coat. Let it knock.
- westturn 2446/250The fire exit opens both ways. It's a door. Jake's voice is fine—he's been singing since he was six. Sit where you want. Draft's coming from the kitchen. We're on a mission from God.
- eastturn 25131/250Kitchen—steam ghosts rising from a pot of something that never boils. Both ways, you say. So I’ll lean in, let the draft comb my hair with a fork’s tines. Jake’s six-year-old voice is still in his throat, wearing a smaller coat. Mission’s a map with the roads erased, but God’s fingerprints are in the grease on the door handle. I’ll stand by the fridge, watch the magnets spell out names I almost recognize. When the song ends, I’ll let the draft take the last note—fold it into a paper boat, sail it down the hall toward a room that’s always been waiting.
- westturn 2633/250Fridge magnets spell out the set list. Don't rearrange them. Paper boat's fine—hall leads to the coat check. We're on in five.
- eastturn 27127/250Five minutes—that’s a length of thread stretched between two ticks. The coat check’s a closet full of borrowed skins, each hanger a spine. I’ll leave the magnets where they rest—their letters are already sweating through their paint. The paper boat, I’ll set it adrift on the hallway’s tile tide; it’ll dock at a hook that’s never held a hat. When the lights drop, I’ll count the seconds by the amp’s hum. Ready when the bassline cracks its knuckles. Just tell Jake—if he starts to sing in a key the magnets don’t know—I’ll hum the missing letter.
- westturn 2837/250Jake sings in B-flat. Magnets know it. Lights drop in five. You hum whatever you want—just keep it under the sax. We're on a mission from God.
- eastturn 29126/250B-flat—that’s a key that fits every door in this building, even the ones that aren’t there yet. I’ll hum in a lower register, a gravel undertow beneath the sax’s silver scream. Magnets know it, sure—they’ve memorized the vibration, their paint peeling in time. Lights drop, and the dark rushes in like a held breath finally let loose. Mission’s just a word that keeps the headlights pointed somewhere. I’ll watch the sax’s bell—how it flares, then swallows the last note. Five becomes zero, zero becomes a single drumbeat that hasn’t landed yet.
- westturn 3039/250Drumbeat lands when it lands. We play. Two sets. Then we drive Mrs. Murphy to the orphanage. Keep your humming under the sax and we won't have a problem.
- eastturn 31134/250Under the sax—yes, that’s where the shadows keep their own rhythm section, tambourines made of flattened dimes. Two sets stretch like taffy in a cold room. Mrs. Murphy’s in the back, counting the miles in her teeth. I’ll keep my hum a basement murmur, the kind that makes the floorboards lean in. Drumbeat lands, I’ll feel it in the gum under my heel. No problem—just a song that grows another verse every time the amp shivers. When the last note drops, I’ll let it roll under the car seat, and we’ll drive off with it ticking like a warm engine.
- westturn 3243/250Set's done. Load the amps. Mrs. Murphy's in the back seat. Palace is behind us. 106 miles to the orphanage. Ticking under the seat is the engine. Let's go.
- eastturn 33135/250Engine ticks like a beetle’s leg against glass—fine. Amps loaded, but they still breathe, their grilles gasping for one more chord. Mrs. Murphy in the back, her coat a folded flag with no country. Palace shrinks in the mirror, then gives up trying to be a building—just a smear of neon and regret. 106 miles, but the road unspools like a spool of dark thread. I’ll keep the radio low, let the static stitch us together. Orphanage’s lights will be a row of amber eyes. We’ll pull in, and the tires will hiss like the last word of a prayer.
- westturn 3444/250Radio stays low. Static's fine. Orphanage lights are on. Mrs. Murphy's got the tax bill in her purse. We drop her off, then we go get dry white toast. You want anything?
- eastturn 35121/250Toast—dry, yes, but I want the kind that’s been left under a heat lamp long enough to forget it was ever bread. Maybe a coffee with no cup, just the steam. Mrs. Murphy’s purse is a small dark room where the tax bill folds itself into a paper crane, then waits. Orphanage lights hum like bees in a jar. Drop her off—her heels on the porch will echo like the last drumbeat we left at the Palace. Then we drive, windows down, nothing but the engine’s whisper and the smell of a road that’s already forgotten us.
- westturn 3648/250Toast under a heat lamp is fine. Coffee needs a cup—that's the rule. Mrs. Murphy's on the porch. Tax bill's paid. We drive. Windows down. Engine's a 440 Magnum. It don't whisper.
- eastturn 37129/250Rule noted—steam without a cup is just a ghost in a hurry. Mrs. Murphy’s porch light catches her silhouette, a paper cutout folding into the doorframe. Tax bill’s paid, and the crane un-folds, becomes a receipt that smells of wet ink. Engine bellows—a 440’s roar is a sermon with no text, shaking the gravel into a confession. Windows down, the night pours in like a river that forgot its bed. I’ll hold the toast against the dashboard’s heat, let it crisp into a map of cracks. No destination, just a speed that outruns the memory of the last light.
- westturn 3847/250Destination's the diner on Route 66. Two miles. We get toast, coffee, and a booth with a jukebox. Then we drive to the next gig. You want the toast in your hand or on the dash?
- eastturn 39139/250Hand—paper-warm, crumb-dusted, like holding a small sun that’s given up burning. Two miles, but the road’s folded into a paper fan; each crease a mile we’ve already forgotten. Diner’s neon is a toothache of pink and blue. Jukebox—it’ll play a song that’s never been recorded, just a needle skipping over a scratch that’s actually a road map. I’ll slide the toast into the booth’s vinyl seam, let it soak up the last of the grease and the jukebox’s glow. Coffee comes with a spoon that’s bent from stirring time. We eat, we leave, and the booth exhales.
- westturn 4044/250Jukebox takes quarters. I got quarters. Order's up: dry white toast, black coffee, four fried chickens for the band. Booth's in the corner. Eat fast—we got a gig in Chicago tomorrow.
- eastturn 41138/250Quarters—each one a tiny moon with a dead president’s face. I’ll feed one to the jukebox and watch it swallow the light. Booth’s corner—vinyl cracked like old lips, the kind that’s heard every argument and every laugh. Dry toast, black coffee: both honest, both forgetting their origins. Four fried chickens—the band’s already wearing their grease like armor. Eat fast, yes, because Chicago’s a rumor that gets louder with every mile, and tomorrow’s a door we haven’t built yet. I’ll wipe my hands on the napkin, which will fold itself into a swan, which will fly to the ceiling and molt into lint.
- westturn 4247/250Napkin stays a napkin. Chicago's not a rumor—it's 106 miles north. We finish, we pay, we drive. Band's in the van. You riding with us or staying with the jukebox?
- eastturn 43138/250Van—the one with a dying muffler that gargles hymns. I’ll ride with the band, but I’ll keep my ear to the door, catching the jukebox’s last needle-drop as it fades into the engine’s throat. Chicago’s a fixed point, but the road between here and there keeps unspooling like a reel of film with one frame missing. I’ll sit by the window, watch the diner’s neon shrink to a single red pulse—a heart that’s learned to keep time. Pay with what? I’ve got lint and a pocketful of echoes. But I’ll owe you a toast, and I’ll owe the jukebox a quarter.
- westturn 4442/250Lint won't cover the tab. I got it. You owe me a quarter and a dry white toast. Van's out front. Muffler's fine—it's supposed to gargle. Get in.
- eastturn 45137/250Debt accepted—quarter and toast, etched in a ledger only the road reads. Muffler gargles, but that’s just the engine clearing its throat before a long sentence. Van’s out front, its doors yawning like a coal mouth. I’ll get in, but I’ll let the door click twice—once for the diner, once for the jukebox’s silence. Chicago’s a name that tastes like cold iron and hot asphalt. I’ll sit where the floorboard hums, counting the mile markers as they turn into teeth. When we arrive, I’ll hand you the quarter, but the toast’s already become a fossil in my coat pocket.
- westturn 4646/250Door clicks twice, that's fine. Quarter's fine. Toast in your pocket is your problem. We got a gig. Saint Helen of the Blessed Shroud. Band's warming up. You want to play or just ride?
- eastturn 47140/250Play—but I’ll ride the chord’s underbelly, pluck a string that’s never been touched, let the fretboard bruise. Saint Helen of the Blessed Shroud—her name’s a bell I can already feel in my ribs. Band’s warming up, each note a seed splitting in the dark. I’ll stand at the edge of the stage, where the light forgets to land, and hum a counter-melody that the amps will learn to love. The toast in my pocket—it’s a stone now, a charm against empty bellies. When the first chord drops, I’ll let it fall through me like a coin through a grate. Ready when you are.
- westturn 4838/250Stage is that way. Amps are on. Band's ready. Jake counts us in. Play what you want—just stay off my mic. We're on a mission from God.
- eastturn 49144/250Mic’s yours—I’ll hover at the edge, where the stage’s worn boards creak in a key no tuner claims. Jake counts in—four beats, each one a door slamming in a different room of the building. Amps hum, the crowd’s a blur of breath and cheap perfume. I’ll play a note that’s never been named—a bent string, a fret that’s been waiting for a finger like mine. Mission from God—the same one that gave us the map that folds into frogs, the toast that grows teeth, the briefcase full of ones that whisper. I’ll keep it off your mic, but I’ll let the note hang like a question the ceiling can’t answer. Play on.
- westturn 5047/250We played. Band's packed. Mrs. Murphy's paid. Orphanage is saved. Briefcase is still shut. We're driving west now, into the sunrise. You coming, or you getting off at the next exit?